PROPERTY

May is right--Friday discussion was great. I've learned more about EerieWe's members. We started with Ball told us the first part of Property. The start was confusing in some small points which I consider important for the start is the reasons/motivations for the actions of the main characters. However, I could see that Ball has tried. I've seen something in him since we've spent time together in Writing II course, but I till now can't tell what it is. It's something that tells me he's not careless yet something in him needs to be improved. I guess it's how he arranges information in his head.

Bank, as well as Krit, has shown he's studied his part. It was me who got carried away with more/deeper detail as we moved on with our discussion while the members appeared not to be prepared for that. I'd like you the members to learn that aything can just happen during the discussion, so you should prepare yourself well.

While three friends shared the story they've read, Pae and Jaa-ae were good listeners in the way that they apparently showed they didn't get the points/how the story goes by asking questions right away. This way I could see these two were trying to follow the story. From this point, I hope the three learned their weak points in performing the role of a 'story teller.

What Ball and Bank did was telling what they've read. No background/more information showing they research while reading. Krit did pretty well in showing he looked up for information concerning some points like, Quakers or general condition of black people in the South of America and whites in the North. It would be great if he read more than once in order to internalise the information/story. Yet I love the way he's frank enough to admit he read only once, otherwise I wouldn't have known how my team works.

A good story teller should lead the journey to the story with interesting and sufficient (background) information. This can be done at the very beginning or later when the story moves on. It depends on style of each person. We do this because we need to equip our audience with repertoire in order to be able to follow the story or know the direction where the story is moving to. This is what three of you missed (but it can be learned and filled as time goes by na kah).

May appeared to be quiet but pay good attention. I guess she needs time to open herself more in order to feed in things around. Tang-mo seemed to rally with May on this point and it's hard for me to judge (kidding girls!). What different in the two is that Tang-mo quietly connecting things/stories she heard to soap opera she'd watched on TV.

For me, I feel a bit uneasy talking to my team about some points as some of them are male. I have to break through it though and I did it by reminding myself--you are a team coach. It helps!